Today's #afewwordsaday #KAFWAD submission
Why not join me? Today's prompts are below. Prompts for the rest of the week are in a separate post just below.
9th September 2015
I'm getting used to this 5-7 syllable format. The more I do it, the less I have to count the syllables. Have a go!
Prompts / date
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9th September 2015
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FMS Photo a day
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I hear
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Text type
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Naga-uta
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Sentence type
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Adjective, same adjective
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Story
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The boy who cried wolf
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Adj, same adj
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A phrase with an adjective, repeat same adjective straight after the
comma. Adds detail and explains. It was
a cold planet, cold due to the distance from the sun
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Naga-uta
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Japanese for 'long song';has mini-Haikus, each stanza is 5-7,
the last is 7-7. Separate chains of naga-uta can go off at a tangent, to add
more detail, explain an underlying motive...
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I heard the boy cry wolf but I ignored him: a wolf killed one of his sheep.
'No one believes a liar even when they tell the truth'
'No one believes a liar even when they tell the truth'
(disclaimer - this didn't really happen. I would have noticed a wolf that big,
and I know that the sponge doesn't look much like a sheep)
and I know that the sponge doesn't look much like a sheep)
A young shepherd boy
He’s
so very bored.
For
weeks now, there’s been no sign
Looking down the hill
The
shepherd boy thinks
‘I
wonder what they would do…’
‘Help! Help! There’s a wolf!’
The men ran to help,
but no wolf was to be seen.
‘I chased him away!’
‘Well done! What a brave young man!’
‘That was fun,’ he thought.
I will try that trick again.
‘Help! Help! There’s a wolf!’
The men dropped their tools,
Once again, no wolf.
The
men were doubtful,
He’d
chased off a wolf
And
yet he wasn’t shaken
He did it again,
They were angry now.
The
daft boy just grinned
He
loved the sport of ‘cry wolf’
Next day he saw a …
He
shouted loudly,
Loudly
so they’d know it’s true.
‘Does he think we’re fools?
The villagers ignored him.
At sunset the boy
didn’t come down with the sheep
The boy was weeping
when they went up to find him.
‘The wolf ate a sheep:
I called, but you did not come.’
No one believes a liar
even when they tell the truth.
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